The Mystery of The Mermaid by Emily

Hi everyone, today I am going to tell you a story called The Mystery of The Mermaid so this is writing piece that I do on my class, so let's get started.

One day a wave come and a little mermaid named Sparkel was bring to this giant land when she was only ten years old. She found all the things that she needs to survive in the giant earth. So that's how she lives for the rest of the ten years. When she was 20 years old she can transform into a mermaid or a human freely(as you know this story is fiction). One day she saw a merman laying on a rock and he seems very hurt so she bring him back to the ocean. When he was awake Sprakle asked what is his name, and he answered Spark. Soon she fell in love with him so they got married. One day another giant wave camed and Spark died. So because of that Sparkle went all around the giant world to find a new home and she never returned. The End. 

So here my story is it sad? Is it happy? Tell me in the comments section. See you next time bye!